I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?

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本篇作文的題目是“我可以幫助做家務”，作者主要敘述自己在家?guī)椭龅氖虑?，介紹自己的名字，所在年級及在家能做的家務，很詳細，到位。

小朋友們在寫作時，應盡量寫一些親自經(jīng)歷的事情，這樣會避免在作文時顯得太空，因為只有自己經(jīng)常做的事情印象才會特別深刻。寫作時還要注意大小寫和時態(tài)。