I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?

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本篇作文的題目是“我可以幫助做家務(wù)”，作者主要敘述自己在家?guī)椭龅氖虑?，介紹自己的名字，所在年級(jí)及在家能做的家務(wù)，很詳細(xì)，到位。

小朋友們?cè)趯?xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)盡量寫(xiě)一些親自經(jīng)歷的事情，這樣會(huì)避免在作文時(shí)顯得太空，因?yàn)橹挥凶约航?jīng)常做的事情印象才會(huì)特別深刻。寫(xiě)作時(shí)還要注意大小寫(xiě)和時(shí)態(tài)。